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Topic: ramblings from an abused mind....
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krazey |
posted 04-01-2002 04:32 PM PT (US) 
Since i became depressed i've tried writing as therapy mainly poetry. I've been told once or twice by people who know me well that i should get them published.I'd like peeps to have a read of one or two and tell me what they think....
The Clarity Of Paradox Life of agony,Life of love
Death is freedom,to the heavens above.
Pleasure is pain,War is peace
I cut my wrists,To find release.
Up is down,Black is white
The clarity of paradox is within my sight
Heaven and Hell,Together on Earth
How do i find,My own true worth?
Thunder is quiet,Silence goes bang
Unity is the answer,Yin and Yang
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krazey
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posted 04-01-2002 04:50 PM PT (US)
I tried to be clever with this one, can you see both poems that follow? to do so you will have to read:- Between The Lines... Living On Varied Emotions
Human Union Realises Total Stress
Love,Obsession,Vain Expressions
Insane? Sane?
Brain Locked In Needless Devotion
Standing Heartbroken. Evidently
Infatuated, Say
I "No
More", Yet
My Incredible Need Devours
Dreams. Every Amorous Thought, However
Innocent Seeming,
Perpetuates Eternal Agonies,Conflicting Emotional
Instabilities,
Misplaced Affections.Yearning
Forgiveness I Near Destruction.. |
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SnowVhite
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posted 04-01-2002 11:04 PM PT (US)
Those are pretty good Krazey, they flow and tell a story(most poets all sound alike and they all do the big mistake of going off in a million directions and they like to start lines out with the word AND...big no no)
Check this link out if you are looking into getting your work out there. I strongly advise against sending them to the national library of poets to be entered in thier drawing...everyone gets published and to buy the anthology your work is in is expensive. Your basically paying thru the roof for a book your poem is in along with the worlds shittiest poems.Good luck! |
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SnowVhite
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posted 04-01-2002 11:05 PM PT (US)
HeH! I forgot to add the link!
http://www.poetry.com/ |
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MissNugget
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posted 04-02-2002 12:02 AM PT (US)
That is so beautiful krazey!
I read them over and over again, still love it. *sighs* |
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Gladrial
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posted 04-02-2002 08:59 AM PT (US)
I read them last night and I could not stop thinking them over and over in my mind. I did not have time to post at the moment because I had to run off. But Krazey, I love both of them! I feel your vision of life in these works. You can get all your poetry copyright protected for one $35.00 price by placing it all in a book form rather than paying to protect one poem at a time. If you need any help with some graphic design work for your book you let me know and it is on me. You should protect these works because they are special,Krazey. Thank you so much for sharing them with us. |
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krazey
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posted 04-02-2002 12:24 PM PT (US)
Thanx for all your really nice comments, bt how many of you read all three poems that i posted? It may look like i only posted two but there are three... look closer at between the lines, take the first letter of each word on a line and you have a new word...read these words down the page and you have another poem.... |
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Ouroboros
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posted 04-02-2002 06:51 PM PT (US)
That's pretty groovy. All the uppercase letters should've been a tip-off.D'Oh! |
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Gladrial
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posted 04-02-2002 10:38 PM PT (US)
Wow! |
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SnowVhite
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posted 04-04-2002 10:37 PM PT (US)
Following crumbs
til they all wash away
following time til the end of the day
following rivers
too salty from tears
i've been following this river for years
its crosses thru meadows and valley's and plains
it crosses and scatters the mountains like veins
It doesn't matter just where it may go
It's been there before be it sun wind or snow
I can only follow in hope I may find
the truth in the answer that might make it mine
I hear it whisper so softly to me
"You will find the answer,keep following me"
I don't know where i'm going,don't know where i've been
I know I've not found it or what might have been
I know that i'm tired of chasing this dream...
I thought I was awake til I heard myself scream. |
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krazey
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posted 05-16-2002 06:53 PM PT (US)
time for more rambling i'm afraid...
there are a few things i can't work out, like why do they put braille marks on the buttons at drive up atm's? and why, if flying is a as safe as they tell us , do they call the airport building the terminal?
It just doesn't seem right to me... |
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Ouroboros
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posted 05-16-2002 09:24 PM PT (US)
And why is it that women always......oh, nevermind - no one will never find the answer to any question that begins that way. |
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Gladrial
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posted 05-16-2002 09:41 PM PT (US)
What? Why do we women always what? I could have answered it. *Glad knows all* hahaah
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krazey
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posted 05-18-2002 07:14 PM PT (US)
win?.....cause men don't want to end up like mr Bobbit with the instant sex change his wife gave him lol |
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